From the four sections on IELTS, most people will have
difficulties particularly on writing section because they have to finish it in
a short amount of time and they have to write, basically, an essay. And the
thing that we need to tell you is you have to try to write and complete your
conclusion paragraph as fast as possible because this is the important and main
part of the writing task and it will also never be looked over by the
examiners. From the experiences of a lot of IELTS test takers that want to achieve
higher band scores; more than 7; they said that they need to plan on writing
the paragraph that functions as the conclusion of your essay that contains not
only the restatement of the problem but also the sentence of the true
concluding.
The purpose of the sentence of your conclusion is to
make the readers have one more idea left to be churned. And usually, this
sentence is also able to make the readers rethink the early idea of the essay
that is stated on the early paragraphs. However, we have to warn you that your
conclusion sentence should not hold a stronger opinion or a main idea because
it will only make your readers more confused.
All you need to do is to write a light sentence that
will make your readers to reconsider the whole points of what you have written
before. For instance, if the subject of your essay is about mandatory
retirement, you do not have to use sentence like the government must
change the policies to prevent the worse situation. Here you use word must
which means it is a too strong conclusion. Instead of the word must, you can
use words like perhaps, would be, or if because all are recommendations and
light.
