Kamis, 22 Februari 2024

ESSAY IELTS TASK 2: Positive or Negative Development - Receive Vaccinations COVID-19

In many nations, it is becoming mandatory for all to receive vaccinations in order to prevent the spread of disease. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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A must-have vaccination for all people to prevent virus transmission is commonly seen today. While this negatively brings side effects for some, I think this is violated as breaking people’s right. 

One reason why making vaccinations mandatory is a negative development is because medical scientists have not tested a vaccine for all the possible side effects that might have, affecting people’s health condition. That is to say, if there is a sudden outburst of disease, then there is a short period to do all the needed clinical trials to support the effectiveness of the vaccine fully. Without thoroughly long-term clinical trials, any vaccine might be dubious. For instance, in 1970-71, in the former Yugoslavia, many children were born with physical disabilities after their pregnant mothers took the mandatory Smallpox vaccine, even though there were done several clinical trials.

What is more, when vaccination for any diseases becomes mandatory, people do not have the right to decide freely, and they might be felt alienated. In other words, freedom of choice is one of the key principles of democratic societies, which is guaranteed by the law. Moreover, if people are not vulnerable to particular diseases, and their immunity is strong, then there is no reason of being vaccinated for a particular disease. For example, one of the most cited reasons by anti-vaxxers for non-getting the Corona vaccine is that their freedom of choice is seriously undermined, and as this might violate people’s rights, it can trigger a rejection leading to chaos

In conclusion, the idea that getting vaccinated is a must for all people to prevent virus transmission is not justifiable as this causes side effects and human rights violates. Where possible, all should get vaccinated for better results, with the exception of those who have problems with ages or certain diseases are not supposed to be

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